What I did In the Holiday.
In the holiday' I went to the Olympic pools first we had to get a wristband. I didn't like It tho but when we got to the pools I Went straight In.
It was cold at first but then It got Warmer and Warmer. I dived in the water with no goggles and my eyes hurt a little but I was fine. Then I wanted to go in the kitty pools for no reason. It was small so I couldn't do a flip. I went to the diving bored and I dove in the water. I landed on my tummy. It hurt a lot and I almost Cried.
It sounds like you had fun at the Olympic Pools! Did you dive off the high or low diving board? I like how you put a personal comment about how landing on your tummy hurt. It helps to paint a picture for the reader.
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